Sunday, August 7, 2011

Poem about space..Anygood?

Anygood? Why yes it's Everygood!---The poem is well written, the flows good, and it has lots of imagery. Your knowledge of constellations is impressive, and although I don't know them as well, after reading the first two verses, I can trust that your accuracy of them goes through to the end. The somewhat lazy pace of the poem fits the stars to a tee, with the exception of shooting ones, they never seem to move,just come and go as the clouds move. Anyway, Good Job, Keep Writing---------------------------------…

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